AI, creativity, and judgy Ginger
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AutumnTompkins
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March 22, 2023
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AI, creativity, and judgy Ginger This is Ginger. She is judgy. “That’s what you’re wearing out?” “Did you even brush your hair today?” “Why. Haven’t. We. Left. YET?!?!?” But you know what’s even judgy-er than my sweet Ginger? AI. I break grammar rules to make copywriting better, which makes me a bit of a word anarchist. So I thought I’d …
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Black Banther
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AutumnTompkins
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October 3, 2020
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Project information Bouncil are celebrating the incredible achievement of the Companies and Stakeholders. Due to BIM’s fast invasion in all over the world specially in the North America Region, we are one of the top 10 nominated Consultants for Council Architectural/Design Practice of the Year Award. Model Council are celebrating the incredible achievement of these Companies and Stakeholders. achievement of …
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Grammar Police Won’t Increase Revenue
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AutumnTompkins
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February 7, 2023
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Grammar Police Won’t Increase Revenue You probably think these grammar police are being unnecessarily mean and nitpicky. A 2016 University of Michigan study looked at how personality influences the way you react to grammar mistakes in written communication. The results? Grammar police are more often “disagreeable, close-minded, and conscientious introverts.” They’re not jerks. They just don’t know better. Mini grammar …
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How “Got Milk” Created a Cult-Like Following
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AutumnTompkins
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September 7, 2022
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How “Got Milk” Created a Cult-Like Following “Got milk?” is a famous California marketing campaign from 1993 that’s built on a supposed grammatical error. This is because it leaves out “who” or “what” got the milk. The correct phrasing should be “Have you got milk?” or “Do you have milk?” It’s almost as boring as almond milk in my morning …
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I’m Lovin’ It – How McDonald’s Used Slang to Increase Its Revenue By $455 million in 1 Quarter
I’m Lovin’ It – How McDonald’s Used Slang to Increase Its Revenue By $455 million in 1 Quarter McDonald’s broke a grammar rule with its 2003 jingle, “I’m lovin’ it.” (Bonus points – it’s also grammatically incorrect because loving isn’t a conjugated form of the verb love – it’s a tense. Specifically, progressive tense.) Even though this jingle is slang …
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If Apple can rebrand AI, then so can I
if Apple can rebrand AI, then so can I Apple cleverly rebranded AI. And, not gonna lie, I like it. Rebranding AI was literally staring everyone in the face. What other brands missed out on this opportunity? Amazon?Air Jordans?American Cancer Society? Before another company capitalizes on rebranding AI, I decided to give it a shot. Because if Apple can rebrand …
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Less Sugar, Less Bottles – How SodaStreams Typo Earned $81 Million
Less Sugar, Less Bottles – How SodaStream’s Typo Earned $81 Million The second half of that tagline is wrong. It should say “fewer bottles” because bottles can be counted. But that would not have been as fun. The alliteration helps with memorability, and it still gets across the idea. (Hint: it’s what makes this tagline compelling.) Just how successful was …
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Make Summer Funner – How A Made-Up Word Increased Target’s Revenue By $5.3 million
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AutumnTompkins
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October 7, 2022
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Make Summer Funner – How A Made-Up Word Increased Target’s Revenue By $5.3 million This lovely little campaign from a few years ago was for Summer at Target and featured eye-popping in-store marketing and larger-than-life events with oversized summer objects. Grammatically speaking, it’s an F. Because Funner is NOT a word, right? (Sure. And unicorn poop cotton candy at the …
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Mel Martin & Fascinations
Mel Martin & Fascinations Copy Editing Hot Take—Most bullet points are just dull, dry lists that lack creativity and fail to entice readers. ^^^^^How do I know? Because my mind begins to wander like a soul stuck in sales page purgatory, searching for a way to move on. Considering that improving bullet points on a sales page can increase opt-ins …
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Microcopy & Prada
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AutumnTompkins
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August 1, 2023
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Microcopy & Prada Consider this Instagram Post from Prada How do you feel about it? Does it captivate you in an elegant way—the way only Prada can? Better yet, is it compelling enough to entice you to visit? Here’s what I thought: I’ll pass on the Prada Caffè experience, k-thanks. Microcopy’s goal is to support the main message but never …
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Spread The Happy – How Nutella’s Grammar Mistake Increased Sales By 15%
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AutumnTompkins
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January 7, 2023
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Spread The Happy – How Nutella’s Grammar Mistake Increased Sales By 15% This campaign turned an adjective (happiness) into a noun (happy). It’s a huge grammar no-no, but it’s a widely-used trick in advertising. By “nouning” the adjective, it turned a lackluster phrase (spread happiness) into something much more memorable and punchy. Because of this, it stood out. Like pure …
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Think Different – How Apple’s Grammar No-No Won The First Emmy For A Commercial
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AutumnTompkins
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August 7, 2022
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Think Different – How Apple’s Grammar No-No Won The First Emmy For A Commercial Pedantic grammarians would argue that a verb (Think) should not be followed directly by an adjective (Different). Instead, the verb should be followed by an adverb (Differently). But is Think Differently a strong piece of communication? Tonally, it’s stiff and boring. Think Different is bold and …
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To Each Their Own – How Honda Civic Used a Gender-Inclusive Pronoun to Increase Its Profit Margin
To Each Their Own – How Honda Civic Used a Gender-Inclusive Pronoun to Increase Its Profit Margin I find some great literary authors exhausting. Jane Austen was among them. I used to think all her heroines were pathetic. All they did was pine away for haughty men who barely knew they existed and treated them badly anyway. Fuck Mr. Darcy …
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What Bull Taught Me About The Laws Of Copywriting
What Bull Taught Me About The Laws Of Copywriting I like watching TV and dedicate 2-3 hours each day to my shows. I don’t consider it “wasting my brain.” I actually consider it research. I even keep a notebook with me to write down tidbits I find interesting. During episode 19 season 4 of Bull, Michael Weatherly and Freddy Rodriguez …
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Why Size Really Does Matter With Copywriting
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AutumnTompkins
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November 7, 2022
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Why Size Really Does Matter With Copywriting The Rule of Three is everywhere. There are many ways to use this rule in your writing. One way is called Hendiatris. (Not to be confused with a medical condition.) This principle uses three words that work together to convey a single concept. It’s especially useful for advertising slogans and speechwriting. And the …
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